Peer Revision of Literary Research Paper    

Author of paper___________________  Class____________  Date____________

Movie title_____________________________   Double-spaced? ______________ Staple this page on top. 

 

Main idea for 1st body:

Main idea for 2nd body:

Main idea for last body:

        

Directions for rough draft:

 

1.  Highlight  your thesis in yellow.
2. Underline your topic sentences in red.
3. Underline your conclusion sentence for each paragraph in black.  (not thesis statement)
4. Highlight your first quote from the movie in blue. Did you cite it?? ____       Write how you cited it

here (                             ). 

     5. Highlight your second quote from the movie in pink. Did you cite it?? ____       Write how you cited it

here (                             ). 

 

5. Highlight your quote from the literature book in yellow  Did you cite it??_____    Write how you cited it here

 (                             ). 

6. Highlight your quote from the other source in green.  Did you cite it??_____     Write how you cited it here

 (                            ).  Did you include the zerox of that quote with the quote highlighted?_______

7. Highlight your restatement of your thesis in the conclusion paragraph in yellow.
8. What introduction technique did you use?
9. Does your paper clearly explain Romanticism and how it applies to your novel/movie?
10. Do you have at least three proofs for each paragraph’s topic sentence?  Number them

#1, #2, #3    in your paragraph.  (Note: you should have a transition and a comma, probably, before each proof/support.)

 

11. Do you have good commentary after each of your examples proving your topic sentence?
12. Did you write in your conclusion about your perspective and assessment of Romanticism—what faults you see in it, what future do you see for Romanticism, do you prefer Realism, how is  Romanticism still important or how it will continue to be important, what can we learn from Romanticism, how do we need it or not need it as a culture, or did you tie it back in with your introduction paragraph somehow? 
13. Does your conclusion paragraph  sound like an ending?
14.  Is your last sentence well-worded and powerful?